The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate how the public Central Library, situated on the floor, changed over a 20-year period. There was

sizeable

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a sizeable

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evolution of the agreement procedure over these years and it

was moderately move

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was moderately moved

was moderately moving

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from

traditional

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a traditional

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Library to a digitalized bookhouse. The most noteworthy change is the children's books place that was put back by the lecture

room

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today .

Aslo

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Also

, the Enquiry desk area, which on condition that services,

such

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as tickets and

book

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books

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go back 20 years ago , was changed to three self-service machines.

On the other hand

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this

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room

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change

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changed

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a cafe . Another

noteable

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notable

noticeable

alteration is the reading

room

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, which was come back to the computer

room

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these days , where can guests read digitalized books

instead

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of papered books.

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, the area of the

room

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that is

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servicing storytelling events today was enlarged a twice its original size.

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, it increases the interactions and imaginations between children and other joiners rather than CDs, videos and computer games.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

168 words

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layout
modern technology
computer stations
multimedia room
multi-purpose spaces
conference rooms
study spaces
community-oriented services
accessibility
wider aisles
ramps
designated areas
people with disabilities
cafeteria
coffee shop
leisurely space

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