The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how the public Central Library, situated on the floor, changed over a 20-year period.
There was
sizeable
evolution of the agreement procedure over these years and it Correct article usage
a sizeable
was moderately move
from Change the verb form
was moderately moved
was moderately moving
traditional
Library to a digitalized bookhouse.
The most noteworthy change is the children's books place that was put back by the lecture Correct article usage
a traditional
room
today .
Aslo
, the Enquiry desk area, which on condition that services, Correct your spelling
Also
such
as tickets and book
go back 20 years ago , was changed to three self-service machines. Fix the agreement mistake
books
On the other hand
, this
room
be change
Wrong verb form
changed
by
a cafe .
Another Change preposition
to
noteable
alteration is the reading Correct your spelling
notable
noticeable
room
, which was come back to the computer room
these days , where can guests read digitalized books instead
of papered books. However
, the area of the room
that is
servicing storytelling events today was enlarged a twice its original size. Moreover
, it increases the interactions and imaginations between children and other joiners rather than CDs, videos and computer games.Submitted by ohso on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
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