The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how the public Central Library, situated on the floor, changed over a 20-year period. There was
sizeable
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evolution of the agreement procedure over these years and it
was moderately move
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from
traditional
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Library to a digitalized bookhouse. The most noteworthy change is the children's books place that was put back by the lecture
room
today .
Aslo
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Also
, the Enquiry desk area, which on condition that services,
such
as tickets and
book
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go back 20 years ago , was changed to three self-service machines.
On the other hand
,
this
room
be
change
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by
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a cafe . Another
noteable
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notable
noticeable
alteration is the reading
room
, which was come back to the computer
room
these days , where can guests read digitalized books
instead
of papered books.
However
, the area of the
room
that is
servicing storytelling events today was enlarged a twice its original size.
Moreover
, it increases the interactions and imaginations between children and other joiners rather than CDs, videos and computer games.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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