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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays,there has been a growing trend of living abroad with a foreign
language
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. Some people believe that folk should talk in the country 's speech to avoid any social troubles
as well as
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 routine problems. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
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 notion .In my essay , I will explain that in detail.
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 , one important problem that people are facing when they do not speak the
language
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 's nation.
Firstly
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 , dwellers cannot communicate with citizens, and they have difficulty making friends and close-knit societies ,
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, They may experience loneliness and separation.
Secondly
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, they will struggle to realize that society has its customs and culture,so they find it hard to cope with the community.
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 , someone who is invited to a birthday party, could not have joy as they do not know how to communicate with them. On the practical issue,requiring
language
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 for living in a country is essential,
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 the fact that someone needs the
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 in supermarkets, pharmacies, hospitals and everywhere .
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, going to the doctor in a hospital requires that someone explain the symptoms in a clear way.
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,if you are an applicant for a job , employers always demand fluency in speaking to secure a position.
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, speaking as a native is one factor which will need to tackle the obstacles and gain a job with a good salary . In conclusion, folks should excel in the
language
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 of the country that they living in, so they can blend with the community and need it in every place.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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