The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

The line graph illustrates the amount of average weekly

patients

visit in four different

catgories

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categories

in clinics at the hospital between 2010 to 2016.

Overall

, it is noticeable that the

number

of

patiants

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patients

at the four clinics

is increase

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except for the birth control clinics which

was

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were

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unchange

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unchanged

.

Firstly

, in 2010 around 240

patients

visited

birth

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control clinic and

this

number

rose to approximately 275

patients

by 2012. But since

then

the

number

of visitors has

drop

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dropped

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to less than 200, in 2014.

However

, it

increasing

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to nearly 250

by

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in

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the

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2016.

In contrast

,

visitor to be

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visitor-to-be

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eye issues concerning

stated

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started

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at lower by 125 in 2010, and it

rise

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rose

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significantly to 350

patients

in the year 2016.

Secondly

, the

number

of diabetic

patients

begining

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beginning

at

rougly

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roughly

60 and slowly grew to under 100, which

finishing

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with sharply expended to 700 by the end of the period.

Additionally

,

appointment

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appointments

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to

dentist

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dentists

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was

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fell to half in 2012 but recovered in the next two years at 125 and gradually picked up to under 150.