Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem. Others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In recent times, it is usually believed that governments and individuals should pay attention to the diminishing of numerous species,

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others claim that humans must concentrate on their available issues. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both views before giving my opinions. First and foremost, people should recognize the fact that

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is understandable that we put human priority on the top. As there are many ongoing issues worldwide that need to be addressed.

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poverty and famine are increasing significantly,

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problems need funds to

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adequately.

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for the development of society that directly

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livelihood. Some people would argue that

instead

of paying attention to topics that are unrelated to them, they must put their advantages on top.

On the other hand

, there are some reasons supporting the statement that wildlife issues need to be tackled by countries and each person. Without concentrating on reducing the detrimental problems of wildlife, humans may face dire consequences in the future. It is important to remember that animals play an important role in balancing the ecosystem.

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, the vanishing of animal species can lead to adverse consequences

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as narrowing the liveable

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, reducing the source of food,

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warming,…

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, if pigs disappear, humans may cope with the scarcity of food. On account of addressing these

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detriments

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, governments and individuals must cooperate to produce conservation processes. In conclusion,

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some people argue that

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attention

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human necessities is more practical and common, I am quite in

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of tackling the decline of

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animal

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life in order to prevent serious problems that could threaten human society.