You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to enquire about the newly opened "LA fitness gym" in the town of Scarborough. For the

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few days, I have been planning to work on my fitness. That's where I came across your advertisement in the newspaper.

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, I was confused about the type of membership suitable for me and its pricing. My preference would be annual membership if the joining fee lies within my budget. I was thinking about weight loosing.

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, if there is availability of exercises and equipment related to cardio like

treadmill

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and cycling would be beneficial for me. Considering the gym is situated near to my house, I would be happy to visit the gym in person for admission. If there is any online facility available for enrollment

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convenient and time-saving for me. I hope that you will consider my request and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely Badaruddin Wasef

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Task achievement

Consider providing a more detailed and organized list of activities you are interested in.

Coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity.

Task achievement

The formal tone is appropriate for a letter to a gym manager.

Coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which enhances professional presentation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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