The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph compares three
companies
in terms of their waste
output
between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that
there were significant changes in the amounts of waste
produced by all three companies
. While
companies
A and B
saw waste
output
fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste
produced by company
C
increased considerably.
In 2000, Company
A produced 12 tonnes
of waste
, while
companies
Capitalize word
Companies
B
and C
produced around 8 tonnes
and 4 tonnes
of waste
material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste
output
of companies
B
and C
rose by around 2 tonnes
, but the figure for company
A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, Company
A cut waste
production by roughly 3 tonnes
, and Company
B
reduced its waste
by around 7 tonnes
. By contrast
, company
C
saw an increase in waste
production of approximately 4 tonnes
over the same 10-year period. By 2015, Company
C
’s waste
output
had risen to 10 tonnes
, while
the respective amounts of waste
from companies
A and B
had dropped to 8 tonnes
and only 3 tonnes
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