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The graph below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts medical treatment and equipment in
austria
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Austria
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,
france
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France
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 and
sweden
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Sweden
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 from 1980 until 2000. There were 3
aspetcs
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aspects
 which being study topic;
doctor
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doctors
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, hospital
beds
 and
average
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the average
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 stay in hospitals.
Overall
, Sweden got the highest amount in 3 different aspects during 20 years. Physicians in Austria
is
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 the lowest,
while
 hospital bed and hospital's average stay in France were the least. Looking in more detail, physicians in Austria experienced a slow increase between 1980 and 2000, from 800 to 1000 people. The availability of
bed
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beds
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 in
hospital
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hospitals
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 grew significantly, from 1400 to 3700
beds
. Meanwhile, people who stayed in
hospital
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the hospital
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 decreased rapidly from 18
until
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to
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 8
days
average
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on average
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.
Furthermore
, in France, the amount of
doctor
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doctors
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 had fallen to 50% at 1300 people.
However
, the total of hospital
beds
 underwent a dramatic
rose
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rise
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 eightfold.
Then
, patients who stayed in
hospital
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the hospital
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 for medical treatment took 9
days
 in 1980 and down to 5
days
 in 2000. The
last
, Sweden had 3600 doctors in 1980 and faced
a
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fluctuated to 3800 doctors in 2000. The number of hospital
beds
 remained
no change
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unchanged
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 at 6400
beds
 from 1980 to 1990 before
went
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going
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 up gradually to 6900
beds
 in 2000. After that, the average
stayed
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stay
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 of inpatients in hospitals went down at 18
days
 in 1990 and up again at 21
days
 in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beds, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • healthcare facilities
  • hospital beds
  • medical personnel
  • healthcare expenditure
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • comparative analysis
  • demographic
  • socioeconomic factors
  • preventative care
  • infrastructure investment
  • affordability
  • accessibility
  • public health policy
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