The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015
The bar charts compare money spent by local government between 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, the highest increase came from welfare and interest Linking Words
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the most decrease came from education and defence. The other categories in 2010 are more or less the same as in 2015. The biggest expenditure was in the education category and the lowest were in transport, culture and leisure, and others.
An incline of expenditure was witnessed by welfare from 8% to 13% and interest on borrowing from 5% to 10%. Meanwhile, cash spent on education occupied nearly a fourth of the pie in 2010 before decreasing to 21% in 2015. Defence Linking Words
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saw a decline of 3%, dropping from 17% to 14%.
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categories like healthcare, transport, and culture and leisure Linking Words
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changed to a smaller proportion, it only lessened by 1% to 2%. Linking Words
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, pensions and Linking Words
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remained the same at respectively 19% and 1%.Fix the agreement mistake
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