The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, the building used to hire in over the period of three years.
The given table illustrates the information in terms of the income and spending of Brooklyn Hall in seven categories over
three
years
. Overall
, it is clear that
almost all categories have a fluctuating trend in three
years
except the trend for Expenditure and profit.
To begin
with, in year
one, the total income was around 72000 pounds
which the expenditure in this
year
was 63000 pounds
. In addition
, nearly 32000 pounds
were the cost of hiring rooms and the amount of money which was spent on the cafe was 3000 pounds
. Furthermore
, there was a budget ranging from 20000 pounds
and 22000 pounds
for funding of council tower and other bodies, respectively.
As is shown from the table, in years
two and three
, these amounts increased steadily compared to year
one except for funding tower and other bodies which remained almost constant. the total money for the cafe was almost doubled in year
three
at 6000 pounds
. Meanwhile, the total income increased by 6000 pounds
and it was 78000 pounds
in year
3. Additionally
, 77000 pounds
was the total expenditure for Brooklyn Hall last
year
. Finally
, the total profit which this
building gained in these three
years
gradually decreased by 8000 pounds
last
year
and it was just 1000 pounds
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