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The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of international
sales
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 of four electronic
games
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 products over a 6-year period from 2000 to 2006.
Overall
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, it can be seen that an upward trend is observed in all
sort
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sorts
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 of
games
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, except for console
games
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. Where handheld
games
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 recorded the highest
sales
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 over the period.
According to
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 the graph, in 2000, the figures for mobile and online
games
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 displayed zero
sales
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,
while
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 the
sales
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 of console and handle
games
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 were nearly 6 and 12
billion
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 dollars. The number of mobile phone
games
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 stayed
remain
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remained
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 at zero in the first two years and
then
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 it increased steadily from about 2
billion
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 in 2002 to it peaked at over 6
billion
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 in 2006. A similar growth in the number of online
games
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 was
start
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started
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 in 2001, at around 1
billion
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 and hit a vertex
by
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of
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 8
billion
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 in the final year.
Furthermore
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, the figure for console
games
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 presented a minimal fall from nearly 6 to less than 3
billion
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 between 2000 and 2006.
Nonetheless
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, there was a slight climb in the figure of handheld
games
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 from roughly 12
billion
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 in 2000 to 14
billion
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 in 2002.
Moreover
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,
the
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apply
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console
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games
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game
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sales
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revealed
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were
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 almost constant at generally 15
billion
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 between 2002 and 2005 and
then
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it
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they
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 rose sharply to 18
billion
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 in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global sales
  • Mobile phone brands
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Consumer preferences
  • Demographics
  • Market dominance
  • Brand loyalty
  • Comparative analysis
  • Sales figures
  • Data interpretation
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