The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line graph illustrates how many international tourists visited three tourist destinations in one European country for two decades, from 1987 to 2007. At a glance, all of the tourist destinations experienced an increase with the coast as the highest. As can be seen, in 1987, the coast started at the highest level about 40
thousand
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. It experienced a slight decrease to approximately 35
thousand
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in the following five years before increasing moderately to reach a peak of 75
thousand
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tourists toward the end of the period. Meanwhile, the mountains stood at the second position in the first year at 20
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and rose slightly in one decade and remained steady until 2002 at 30
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before having a slight increase of merely 5
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in 2007. Starting as the lowest number of tourists in 1987, visitors to the lakes grew significantly in 10 years to 3 times as many around 40
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in 1997. Five years later, it rose dramatically more than threefold and peaked at around 75
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in 2002. After that, the visitors' numbers dropped significantly to only 50
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by the end of the period.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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