Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

With the ever-increasing number of

people

, they believe that

parents

should bear the responsibility to teach

the

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children

to become contributing

members

in

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of

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society. Others maintain that

school

can be the best place to reshape the learning of

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qualified

members

. In view of the socialization process, I think the

parents

should be the best opinion to teach the

students

who contribute to society more and become outstanding

people

in society. First of all, the main initiative of suggesting why a person is taught by the

parents

to learn to become a good member is

a

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primary socialization. It is no longer to say that

parents

are essential and role models to

kids

and

children

.

Parents

can bear the identity or images of their

kids

when they are young.

In addition

,

parents

not only understand their own

children

's personality and characters

,

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but

also

impact

students

' own values and beliefs more easily.

For example

, It is no exaggeration to say that

parents

can not only become role models (like in the

volunteer

training)

,

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but

also

become the

experience

of being a

volunteer

and helping others. There is no doubt that the

parents

can showcase

the

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positive identity if

kids

will

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receive the

volunteer

experience

with

parents

during early childhood stages and thereby have the

chances

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of learning

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by osmosis.

Therefore

,

parents

are

essence

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or first social

agent

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agents

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for acting and becoming

the

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good

member

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members

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.

Then

,

despite

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the

parents

can accept the responsibility of providing

students

to learn as

the

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good social

members

. Certainly, the

school

is necessary and to somewhat

extent

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the ability

of teaching

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students

contributes to how to become a good member. It is widely acknowledged that schools can either provide the

service learning

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course or programme

,

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or offer the

volunteer

experience

no

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limits to the government , non-government

organization

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organizations

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(

NGO

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) and private sectors. The more

volunteer

experience

students

gain, the more authority and department

people

will receive to

invite

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by the

school

co-organisation. The

school

indeed has

the

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micro-society concepts,

with

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providing many kinds and types of

students

who play as

the

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social

members

. Different

students

can play

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significant role

to collaborate

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with each other and perform the advantage of personality, like the facilitator, collaborator,

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. If the

students

can have time and availability, still,

students

will

have

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chance

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to plan

students-initiative

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and

students-led

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project

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projects

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to have team-basis

volunteer

work more

frequent

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frequently

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,

regular

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and standard.

Finally

, it can be concluded from the discussion that the responsibility of teaching

students

to become good

people

or

members

. There is no limit to cultivating

students

' personality and character, but

also

the chances of having the

volunteer

and service learning

experience

to teach

students

help

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others by using the

students

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student's

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own

ability

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abilities

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. Yet, it would be better if the

parents

taught

children

and

kids

more easily as long as they were familiar with the

children

's characteristics and personalities.