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the table below shows the numbers of students at a malaysian secondari school during two school years. the charts show the result of surveys asking the students what their favorite sports is

the table below shows the numbers of students at a malaysian secondari school during two school years. the charts show the result of surveys asking the students what their favorite sports is
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The given table displays the quantity of
the
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students
at
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a
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Malaysian secondary education between 2004 to 2005 and 2014 to 2015, whilst the pie charts describe a survey
in
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 the
proportion
 of
the
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students
 engaged in their
favorite
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sports
 in that given period.
Overall
, the
numbers
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number
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 of
students
 experienced
a
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 upward trend after ten years ,
while
 the survey reported that after a decade the percentage of
students
 participating in basketball and football witnessed
a
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 increase, tennis and swimming had a downward trend, just rugby
remined
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remained
 the same in the
proportion
 of
students
 involved in
this
 sport over a decade.
To begin
 with, in the school year 2004-2005, there were 73,000
students
 at a Malaysian secondary school. The figure
increase
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 by 18, 000
Students
 in 2014-2015. In
the
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2004-2005 Of those, 15 %
students
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of students
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attracted
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 to basketball
sports
, albeit not as great as football's ( 30 %).
this
 figure
then
 increased after ten years to 35 % and 40 % respectively.
in contrast
, Tennis which was the most popular
sports
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among
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the
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Malaysian secondary education at 40 % in 2004-2005 had a decrease in the
proportion
 of
students
 involved in
this
sports
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sport
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to
become
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15 % in 2014-2015.
like wise
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 the tennis,
swimming
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and swimming
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 figure decreased to become
a
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half (5 %) in
the
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ten years later.
in addition
, the
proportion
 of
students
 participating in rugby
had
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did
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 not change during the given period with 5 %
students
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of students
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, proportion, sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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