Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

People
like sweet food and drink. Currently, food and beverages that contain high levels of
sugar
are
at
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within
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our reach by just buying from the nearest minimarkets.
However
, consuming too much
sugar
and not
balanced
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with adequate physical activity will lead to various health problems,
such
as diabetes. Many
people
suggest the price of sugary
products
should be priced more to make
people
consume them less. From the given recommendation, I would disagree because of two reasons.
First,
people
with medium to high income will still be able to afford these
products
because simply they have money, and they want to enjoy it.
For instance
, workers with high salaries can buy a beverage that contains a high level of
sugar
because they think the drink will cure their stress of working.
Therefore
, the government should think of another approach that restrains these groups of
people
from buying sugary
products
.
Second,
not only increasing the price of the product, but manufacturers
also
need to inform
people
of the
effect
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effects
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of consuming sweet
products
,
such
as informing from the package.
For instance
, smoke
products
display the image of
people
who
get
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affected severely by smoking. In
this
case, manufacturers can stick a tiny poster of
people
who are overweight as the effect of excessive consumption of
sugar
behind the product. I believe
people
will be interested in reading the poster
while
drinking. In conclusion, increasing the prices of sugary
products
is not an effective way to encourage
people
to consume less sugary foods and drinks. The action must think about the citizens who are still able to afford the
products
.
In addition
, the government can mandate the producers to add a display of the effect of
sugar
without limit to increase the awareness of the
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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