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You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter Say which part-time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your booking Ask about booking a different course

#course #college #administrator
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am willing to cancel my enrollment in one of the upcoming programs and want to inquire about an alternative. It is the "Python for Data Analysis" starting from the 1st of April. Let me explain my problem in more detail.
Although
 the course itself is both up to date and well organised, the problem starts with my unforeseen work commitments. I have been working on two jobs spontaneously for the
last
 couple of years.
Moreover
, I have deadlines for certain tasks
this
 quarter which I need to address proactively.
Hence
, these days I am working 15 hours a day
due to
 conflict with my work I will not be able to attend the classes.
As a result
, would you kindly withdraw my booking?
Nonetheless
, I will definitely want to foster my skills by continuing my learning journey, in the next quarter. It is
therefore
 requested that share a course that targets SQL query performance which is something I am looking for in future challenges. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Haris Khan
Submitted by Haris Khan on

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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that the letter consistently maintains a clear and logical structure. Use connectors to smoothly transition between ideas and paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Consider providing more specific details about the situation, such as the impact on studies or potential time frames for taking a new course.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Part-time course
  • Cancellation
  • Booking
  • Administrator
  • Financial situation
  • Work commitments
  • Health issues
  • Inconvenience
  • Transfer
  • Subject area
  • Schedule
  • Format
  • Cancellation policy
  • Refund process
  • Assistance
  • Understanding
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