The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide information regarding the outlay of local government in 2010 and 2015.
Overall
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it is clear that
education and healthcare are the largest expenses over the two periods. Linking Words
While
there was an increasing trend in borrowing and transport, other categories decreased, and the expense for pensions was the same.
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To begin
with, the expenditure on education and healthcare was the largest in 2010, contributing to less than half of the total, at 45%. Linking Words
In addition
, the figure for pensions was the second largest, making up 19% of the whole. Linking Words
While
the rate for Linking Words
defense
accounted for 17%, the number for the remains was not more than one in ten expenditures.
Turning to the government expenditure in 2015, there was a decreasing trend for both education and healthcare, making up 21% and 20% of the whole, respectively. Change the spelling
defence
While
the outlay for pensions remained the same as in 2010, the fund for Linking Words
defense
fell by 3%. Change the spelling
defence
Furthermore
, the rate of interest on borrowing and transport rose to 5%, accounting for 10% and 13% respectively.Linking Words
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