The government spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

In recent years, the allocation of substantial financial resources by governments worldwide towards the

exploration

of life on other planets has sparked considerable debate/ нэлээн маргаан дагуулж байна/.

While

some argue that these

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need to be allocated for solving essential social

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my perspective, I believe that

exploration

of other planets and astronomy is vital,

however

, the expenditure from

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should not adversely affect the budget designated for tackling public societal and environmental concerns.

Firstly

, humans need to survive in case any catastrophic event occurs on Earth.

Therefore

, an increasing number of researchers have been exploring outer space and searching for other planets as potential living opportunities. Exploring

this

opportunity requires special equipment, laboratories, and specialists, and

this

is why the

government

spends a lot of money on

this

research.

For example

, NASA, a massive

government

-funded organization in the US, plays

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role in global space

exploration

. It consistently presents new experiments and innovations for the benefit of humanity.

On the other hand

, the

government

needs to address social

issues

, as many people worldwide are suffering from fundamental human needs like poverty, famine, and homelessness.

Moreover

, environmental

issues

should be concerned by the

government

,

such

as air, water and soil pollution that are facing challenges to

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humanity in recent years. As long as humans inhabit/live the world, we must be responsible for our surroundings and the well-being of future generations.

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,

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certain percentage of

public

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budget

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to

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for

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social and environmental

issues

.

To conclude

, both arguments are valid and policy makers need to have careful consideration.

While

I consider the

exploration

of airspace and astronomy to be essential, it is imperative that the

government

allocates funds for the advancement of

this

field.

However

,

such

expenditures should not compromise the budget earmarked for addressing societal and environmental

issues

, including poverty, famine, and contaminant surroundings.