A large company In your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, alter to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company, In your letter describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summaries the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to your survey about sponsorship for a local
children
's sports team
or paying for two outdoor concerts.
In my opinion, sponsoring a local children
's sports team
for two years will encourage them to move towards their goals. Moreover
, this
can guarantee their future, choose
for our national Wrong verb form
choosing
team
in particular
, by casting in different matches.
On the other hand
, paying for two outdoor concerts would be able to bring huge attention to your company in a short period of time. Indeed, this
can bring happiness for
more folks and will help your company to be at the top of the news for several days.
I believe helping Change preposition
to
children
by supporting their local team
have
more positive aspects both for you and the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
children
. Furthermore
, your company will be seen in different competitions as a sponsor, while
helping children
to take important steps for their future profession.
Thanks for your help and support for the society.
Yours faithfully
Ali AlaeiSubmitted by ali on
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Ensure that the letter addresses all parts of the prompt fully, including clear benefits for both options and the reasoning for the recommended choice.
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Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter to match the context of writing to a company.
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