You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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to inquire about the work-related seminar where I would like to participate in a different location. I have some questions regarding the event; who will be in charge of the seminar which is going to be organized somewhere? Though, I came to know through the advertisement so I have decided to inquire more in detail about what are the accommodation service your company provides if I attend

this

seminar? Could you tell me what kind of program will be there? Could you please tell me where I get in-depth information

such

as on which date and place? where

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event will be organized so I could attend. Another one is the cost of entry please mention

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to me so I can arrange for

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participant. I would appreciate the kind of information that you will be access to me. I look forward to seeing your response soon. Yours faithfully, Mukesh Sharma

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea or request to enhance the clarity of your letter.

Task Achievement

To achieve full task completion, clarify your own situation or needs related to the seminar to create a more personalized and detailed letter.

Task Achievement

Use a more formal tone and specific language suited to a professional or semi-formal letter, avoiding overly casual or vague expressions.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

160 words

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A road near your home is damaged. Write a letter to the council of your city/town to complain about it. In your letter: - tell them who you are and where you live - explain the nature of your complaint - say what you would like them to do about it