You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets •explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Mary, How are you doing? I hope you are well and doing good. What are you doing on
this
coming weekend? I know what are you doing, you are coming with me to a concert by Chris Brown. I know you will be happy to hear that I got free passes for a live show in London at 8.00 P.M
this
coming Saturday.
Finally
, your dream will come true and you can enjoy his live performance in the London stadium. Currently, one week ago I filled out an online contest on "Live- shows.com" and I have been waiting for his results for the
last
few days. Yesterday morning I got an email from their side, in that mail they informed me about 2 free passes for his upcoming performance.
Firstly
, I was in a shocking state and felt that maybe
this
mail was a scam, but
then
I found two tickets as well in the following attachment.
Although
I know it is on very short notice, you have been dreaming about
this
for your whole life. I still have our childhood memories in which you were doing a signature step of Chris Brown and dancing to his songs. Whenever I listen to his music, I have your face in my mind. That's why I want you to come with me and enjoy the best time of your life. I hope I will see you Friday evening for some shopping and let's have dinner together as well. Best regards, Vandana Tomer
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a logical flow and clarity when shifting between ideas to enhance coherence. Try to use linking words to connect sentences and paragraphs better.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. While a degree of informality is acceptable in a letter to a friend, certain expressions should be more formal and crafted to match the nature of traditional letter writing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enthusiasm
  • eager
  • anticipation
  • once-in-a-lifetime
  • music genre
  • unforgettable experience
  • headlining
  • spectacular
  • venue
  • line-up
  • e-tickets
  • VIP access
  • social media giveaway
  • radio contest
  • camaraderie
  • bond over
  • tribute
  • nostalgia
  • cherish
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