You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets •explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Pari ,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that , I won two tickets to a concert and I want you to attend this
event along with
me.
To begin
with ,I have two tickets for a live show by popular singer Abhijeet Singh , which is going to be held on 23rd December , Friday at Infinity Mall which is very close to your house . Actually, Last
week in my office our HR organised some games along with
High- tea . therefore
, I also
participated in all the activities and I won one game i.e. who can stand on one leg for a longer period. So in return for the winning team or an individual, our company gave us a ticket to the concert.
Secondly
,I want you to accompany me because I know you are a big fan of Abhijeet Singh .Moreover
, you are also
interested in Singing competitions, I still remember you always loved to sing a song in your spare time and you also
participated in many singing shows.
Waiting for your reply
See you soon , Take care
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greeting and closing
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The greeting and closing should be appropriate for the context of a semi-formal letter. Consider using 'Dear [First Name],' to start and 'Warm regards,' or 'Best wishes,' to close.
logical structure
Create a logical flow of ideas making sure each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next. Use cohesive devices effectively to maintain coherence throughout the letter.
single idea per paragraph
Maintain focus on a single idea for each paragraph to ensure clarity and coherence. This will help the reader to follow your arguments easily.
complete response
Ensure you fully address all three bullets points provided in the task prompt thoroughly. Give sufficient detail and development to each point for a complete, rounded response.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter should consistently match the semi-formal register appropriate for writing to a friend. Avoid overly formal or informal language, and aim for a warm, friendly tone throughout.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite