Nowadays, many old cities are rebuild and redesigned( with older buildings knocked down) in order to look modern. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this practice?

The building's renovation is a common thing around the world. These days, numerous traditional.urban places have to be

rebuilded

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and redesigned with older

buildings

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collapsed and new modernized

buildings

will

be build

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.

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trend has benefits

as well as

drawbacks

;

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. There are two major advantages of old

cities

to be renovated for being updated look. One of the main merits is that people have to

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all the modern facilities when

cities

will

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alter

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by modern

such

a

a

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transportation,

hospital

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hospitals

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, education and entertainment.

This

new look is required to satisfy the

population

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population's

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needs and wants.

For example

, in India, many traditional metropolitan places had to be altered by modernized

buildings

, road facilities, and shopping malls which

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to Indians

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all the modern amenities.

Moreover

, new updated looks in

cities

attract to a plethora of visitors around the world in order to country's economy get more money from

touruim

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tourism

sector. These are the two main root advantages of changing modernized

cities

by collapsing the older

buildings

. Despite these benefits,

this

trend has

drawbacks

. One of the main disadvantages is that the traditional

buildings

have more

heritages

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and cultures of the past people. When

this kind

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these kinds

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of

buildings

were renovated

by

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with

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new

buildings

with all the facilities

while

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the

ancestor's

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ancestors'

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culture and

tradition

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traditions

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are

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existed.

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, the ancestor's

buildings

have

more

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more technical skills because they had not

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any new technology

equipments

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equipment

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but those

building

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buildings

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are very strong and long-lasting.

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, if the older

buildings

had

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knocked down for renovating-purpose, the older people's engineering style and what are

the

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materials they used that everything will be ruined which less to the younger generation

will not

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have a chance to know about

those

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. These are the

drawbacks

of

this

phenomenon.

To conclude

, many older

cities

to

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be altered by new

buildings

. The population have to use the modern amenities and numerous visitors are visited those places in order to

xounyey's

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country's

economy will boost which are the benefits of

this

phenomenon. The past folk's culture, heritage and tradition will

be existed

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and

those

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mankind's engineering style will be ruined by

knocked out

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older

buildings

which are the

drawbacks

of

this

trend.