The graph shows the consuption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007, Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart below illustrates the
use
of spreads from 1981 to 2007.
Overall
, the consumption in grams
for all spreads decreased over time. Furthermore
, the use
of low fat
and reduced spreads started in 1996.
Between 1981 and 1986, butter Add a hyphen
low-fat
use
rose slightly from just above 140 to nearly 160 grams
where as
margarine dropped steadily from about 90 to 80 Correct your spelling
whereas
grams
. From 1986 to 1991 there was plummet
in butter consumption from almost 160 to 100 Add an article
a plummet
grams
while
margarine grew gradually 80
to 100 Change preposition
from 80
grams
.
Between 1996 and 2001, there was a rocket in the use
of low fat
and reduced spreads from 10 to about 85 Add a hyphen
low-fat
grams
. Margarine remained stable from 1991 to 1996.Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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