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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
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The presented table details about characteristic weather and cycle of daytime within the same
weekend
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 in two different countries (London and Sydney) in December 2018. The temperature was counted in Celcius.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that both the highest and lowest temperatures in London occur on the same
day
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 which was on Saturday 29th (13 and 3, respectively).
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, the highest cold in Sydney happened on the
day
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 of the 30th (31) even if the lowest was on
Friday
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 the 28th (17). In London, the peak condition on
Friday
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 28th and Sunday 30th just above 10 whilst the coolest was approximately at 5. There was a slightly different time of
sunrise
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 which was on
Friday
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 28th at 08.05 the sun appeared on the horizon the next
day
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 at the same duration at 08.06 a.m. Unlike the
sunrise
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, the span of sunset was distinguished between the
weekend
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 days which have 1 second at different times (15:57, 15:58, 15:59, respectively). To compare, the heat in Sydney was hotter, the
sunrise
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 more faster and the sunset stage was longer. The beginning
day
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 of
weekend
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, the coolest warmth at 17 and 18 despite the fact that the climate reach on peak at 26 and 28. Both of
sunrise
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 happen at 05:45 which reverse on Sunday 30th, the hour extend till 1 minute.
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, the opposite pattern occur for sunset term which was on
Friday
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 28th at 20:06
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 the next
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 was 20:07.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words weekend, day, friday, sunrise with synonyms.
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