Write a letter to your friend inviting Him /her to a music concert. Please say. -Where and when does the concert start? - What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it

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Dear Zara I hope you are doing absolutely fantastic! I am beyond thrilled

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letter to provide some information about the Oshega Melody Festival.

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concert will be happening in Montreal, on Saturday 8th and will be from 8PM to 12AM. I was wondering if you would like to join me at

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event, that would be the best bet for both of us.

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, when you are here you've got to check out different types of acoustic

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jazz, instrumental and electro. Especially jazz and electro

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a hidden gem with a laid-back atmosphere and charm all their own. I know you often hear old acoustic and romantic songs on your smartphone. Here you can explore historical and classical opera at the beginning of the event. Trust you will fall in love with

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melody festival. Please let me know what you think about

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plan. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours truly, Vairag

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Consider discussing the concert's atmosphere or any other specific details that might appeal to your friend, to make the invitation more compelling.

coherence cohesion

Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve coherence. Each separate thought or piece of information could have its own paragraph.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear and warm greeting and closing, which enhances the friendlly tone.

task achievement

The writer successfully provides essential information about the concert, such as location, date, and type of music.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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Write a letter to your friend inviting Him /her to a music concert. Please say. -Where and when does the concert start? - What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it

The Closing

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