The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the numer of new shops that opened in one coutry between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the numer of new shops that opened in one coutry between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the in

formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
The line charts depict information on the number of store shops that closed and opened from the
year
2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the trend of both shops closing and opening relatively decreased since in the first
year
. In terms of the closed stores, approximately 6.200 retails closed in the first
year
.
Therefore
,
this
figure
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7.000 retails. In the next 2 years, the aggregate of closed merchants just dropped to the lowest amount below 1.000.
Nevertheless
, the closed retails jumped to 5.000 in 2016 and
then
steadily until the end of the period.
On the other hand
, the opening merchant was the highest amount in the first
year
. The data presented shows that opened merchant just falls to 4.000 stores in the next
year
. Even though the shop had risen to the peak of the amount of the opening store in one country.
Then
, around 4.000 retails were opened in 2015
then
relatively stable throughout three years. By the end of the period, the opening merchant just declined to the lowest number.
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