Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?”

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should charge

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or not.

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the fact stated that

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with

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have

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than the free ones. I must say, charging people for

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to

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has more disadvantages which will be discussed in

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with, as an educational place

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brings information and

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, the

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can be

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new source of knowledge. Rather than acquiring knowledge from questionable sources, in

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, all of the information is trustworthy and accountable. That's why many school vacations and families who have children often visit free-

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. The National British

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, brings a lot of physics, biology, geology, and other knowledge in fun ways, yet they decided to be a

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. How do they get funding for their daily maintenance if it is not from

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fees? I must add, that funding can be derived from any links and sources, especially for society and educational purposes. The mentioned example above is the National British

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, they got money from some foundations and the

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, so it is easy to be fully funded

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here. The UK

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has already issued the voting results of parents at several schools and they tend to go to

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with their families only for free

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tickets.

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, it is not about

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ticket which helps the maintenance

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of the

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, but more likely how to increase visitor engagement so they can promote their

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to foundations and the

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to get full funding. In summary, people are fond of the free

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and the

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the foundations are more tendencious to give their funding to engaging

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.

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the disadvantages of chargable

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are exceptionally high,

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as the decrease in visitor numbers in the long run, less engagement, and less to be promoted in society. So, it will be wiser if all of the

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are not chargeable for recalling their benefits to