There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last times you complained explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to tell you about the condition of the changing rooms and I will write the main problems to draw your attention so you can take immediate action.
Firstly
, Our sports centre has a good reputation in the public. But there is a problem with the AC of the room which is not working and there is also
a smell which indicates the area is not cleaned properly or on a regular day. Secondly
, the door of the place is not locked as it becomes old because of longer use.
Moreover
, I already told the receptionist about the issues to change the condition but I did not see any action or improvement.
Therefore
, I request you please hire more workers to clean the room regularly as well as
fix the lock of the door. I hope immediate action should be taken to make our sports centre more popular.
Yours Faithfully,
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