The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts indicate the proportion of the most common disadvantages and advantages sectors of travellers who visited Bowen Island.
Overall
, there was the pros development of the highest popularity of local Linking Words
people
, Use synonyms
whereas
there was the cons development of the lowest popularity of cost of living.
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To begin
with, the most common advantage of the highest Linking Words
percentage
of travellers was the local Use synonyms
people
sector, at 42%. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the second highest Linking Words
percentage
of visitors was in the scenery sector, at 35%, it was less than 5% in the local Use synonyms
people
sector. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the good accommodation and culture sectors were less than 30% of the local Linking Words
people
, at 11% and 12% respectively.
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In contrast
, the most common disadvantage of the largest Linking Words
percentage
of respondents was the high cost of living, at 50%. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the second largest Linking Words
percentage
of respondents was entertainment, at 25%, it was less than half Use synonyms
in
the cost of living. Ultimately, the weather condition and the food quality sectors were 15% and 10% respectively, they were less than the largest one, almost 40%.Change preposition
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