The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts indicate the proportion of the most common disadvantages and advantages sectors of travellers who visited Bowen Island.
Overall
, there was the pros development of the highest popularity of local people
, whereas
there was the cons development of the lowest popularity of cost of living.
To begin
with, the most common advantage of the highest percentage
of travellers was the local people
sector, at 42%. Similarly
, the second highest percentage
of visitors was in the scenery sector, at 35%, it was less than 5% in the local people
sector. On the other hand
, the good accommodation and culture sectors were less than 30% of the local people
, at 11% and 12% respectively.
In contrast
, the most common disadvantage of the largest percentage
of respondents was the high cost of living, at 50%. Likewise
, the second largest percentage
of respondents was entertainment, at 25%, it was less than half in
the cost of living. Ultimately, the weather condition and the food quality sectors were 15% and 10% respectively, they were less than the largest one, almost 40%.Change preposition
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