The bar chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart gives us information about five different zones and their change

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average house prices between 1990 and 2002 compared to 1989.

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, between 1990 and 1995 the amount was less important than in 1989, three of the five cities had a lower average price. In the next seven years

this

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changed, the cost of homes increased significantly in comparison to 1989. In the first half of the

90s

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'90s

, cities

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as New York, Tokyo and London

had

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apply

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suffered a decrease in home valuations, between 5 and 7% compared to 1989.

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, other cities

as

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such as

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Madrid or Frankfurt made their real estate value grow in a not very big way, in fact, they grew between 2 and 3%. In the second half of the 90s something different happened, the value of residences,

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of going down, rose noticeably in every single city except in Tokyo, the rise

reaches

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reached

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12% in London, 5% in New York, 4% in Madrid and 2% in Frankfurt. In the Japanese city, the amount is 5% smaller than in 1989.