The chart below show the the information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.

The chart below show the the information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.
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The line graph illustrates the trend of gym fellowship by gender from 1980 until 2010.
Overall
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, as can be seen, the figure for boy's membership fluctuated for the whole year.
In contrast
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, the girls' tendency has gone up over the period shown and has two peaks of members which counted in 1995 and 2006. Both of these movements declined
at the end
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of the stage. In 1980, there were a lot of boys who applied for membership and it climbed to 4000 members in 1985 before the number of participants decreased for a decade.
However
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,
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sport became popular again and took over the past position which was a dramatic rise. It was counted that just over 5000 joined the club and ranked as the highest participation in the whole moment.
On the other hand
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, it can not stand in the long run and fell sharply in 2010. In the female direction, it was shown that the participants for the whole period were fewer than boys. In 1980, it was just followed by 1000 females.
Then
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, the popularity increased until 1995 which counted at nearly 3000 girls joined the gym club which had the same number in 2006. The interest shifted for the subsequent years and dropped gradually in the
last
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period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart, line graph, bar chart
  • depicts, shows, represents
  • male and female gym membership
  • 30-year period
  • significant increase/decrease
  • stable period, plateau
  • trends and patterns
  • compared to, in contrast with
  • rising trend, upward trajectory
  • plummeted, declined sharply
  • remained steady, fluctuated slightly
  • widened gap, narrowing gap
  • membership figures, subscription rates
  • peaked, reached a high
  • bottomed out, reached a low
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