The graph shows the average carbon emissions per person in four countries between 1967 and 2007

The graph shows the average carbon emissions per person in four countries between 1967 and 2007
The line chart illustrates the average
carbon
emissions from each
person
in
four
different countries through
four
decades, from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, per capita,
carbon
emissions in Italy and Portugal increased steadily,
while
the United Kingdom faced a gradual decline, and
Sweden
hit a peak in 1977
then
significantly dropped until the end of 2007. At the start of the period, 1967, Portugal in terms of the
carbon
footprint was only around 1.2 metric
tonnes
per
person
, which is the lowest among the
four
countries.
On the contrary
, people in the United Kingdom emitted almost 11 metric
tonnes
, which is the highest among the
four
countries. Through the improvement in renewable energy and effective education.
Although
the United Kingdom is still the country which produces the most amount of
carbon
dioxide, people living there reduced by roughly 2 metric
tonnes
, from almost 11 to a little under 9. Look into Italy and Portugal, their trend of increase is quite the same, both grew around 4 metric
tonnes
per
person
. Italy ended a little lower than 8, meanwhile, Portugal ended at approximately 5.
Moreover
,
Sweden
reached a high peak in 1977, which was slightly above 10 metric
tonnes
per
person
, and significantly dropped to 7 metric
tonnes
in 1987. At the same time, Italy's
carbon
emissions first exceed
Sweden
's.
At the end
of the period, 2007, the data in
Sweden
and Portugal were identical, around 5.5.
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  • carbon emissions
  • per capita
  • environmental impact
  • trend analysis
  • industrialization
  • energy consumption
  • greenhouse gases
  • sustainable development
  • emission reduction
  • technological innovation
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • economic growth
  • climate change
  • environmental policy
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