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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given chart illustrates the sum of
magazines
 bought by a person in five different
countries
 in 2003 and 2005,
as well as
 a forecast for 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that
although
 the general number was the greatest in
countries
 A, B and
then
 C, all of them witnessed a decrease in the figure of
magazines
 sold.
In contrast
, even though the total sum was the lowest in
countries
 D and
E
, it rose throughout the years.
Above all
, these patterns are predicted to continue in 2007, with the exception of
country
E
.
To begin
 with, from 2003 to 2005 the number of
magazines
 in
countries
 A and B saw a slight decline from approximately 50 to more or less 45.
Similarly
, the figure in
country
 D decreases from roughly 35 to marginally less.
Conversely
, the figures in
countries
 D and
E
 modestly grew, from around 18 to 20, and about 5 to 8, respectively. As far as the predictions for 2007 are concerned, the number of
magazines
 bought in
countries
 A, B and C is projected to constantly decrease. Correspondingly, in
country
 D the prime upward pattern is forecasted to continue.
However
, despite the previous growth, the figure in
country
E
 is prognosticated to recede to 5, making it unchangeably the lowest of all
countries
 and all years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, countries, e, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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