The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts provide information about the four types of retail sectors in Canada
have
been sold via online transactions from 2005 to 2010, calculated in percentage. Correct pronoun usage
that have
Overall
, it is evident that every category has experienced an
minor changes over 5 years.
Looking at the details, video games, which had the smallest portion in 2005 with 18%, increasedCorrect the article-noun agreement
apply
5
% and reached third place of all sectors outperforming home furnishings by 8% in 2010. Change preposition
by 5
However
, from having one fourth
of the chart, home decoration's percentage had decreased 10% in the next 5 years.
Add a hyphen
one-fourth
Furthermore
, in the year 2010, electronic machines lost position
for the highest number of online sales to food and beverage with merely 2% because culinary had Correct pronoun usage
their position
growth
10% and electronic equipment had declined 5%, becoming 32% and 30%, respectively.Replace the word
grown
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