After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my gratitude and to invite you and your family to come to my home. I hope you know me but if you are not

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I vividly remind you that I am a person who was saved by you in a fatal crash accident. So, I would like you to be thankful for saving my life if you were not there

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I wouldn't be here. Because of you I am happy and can see my family members' faces happy. I do not know how much am I going to owe you

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, my wife decided to make you appreciate your sake of help. Anyway, we would like you to accept my invitation to visit my home with your family and have a pleasant dinner so I can have a chance to express my feelings. I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Hardik Mehta

Submitted by patelhardik2199 on Sat Jan 13 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that you lay out your letter with clear and distinct paragraphs, separating your introduction, the expression of gratitude, and the invitation accordingly to enhance the logical structure and coherence.

coherence cohesion

Use an appropriate greeting and closing for a semi-formal or informal thank you letter. The closing is friendly, but the greeting could be more personalized if the name of the person is known.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. The language should be respectful and warm but also semi-formal, as it is a letter of gratitude to someone you do not know personally.

coherence cohesion

Make sure that each paragraph presents a single idea clearly. Introduce yourself and provide context in one, express your thanks in another, and extend your invitation in a separate paragraph to avoid confusion and enhance readability.

task achievement

Ensure you completely address all parts of the task. While you did introduce yourself and express appreciation, the invitation could be clearer and more detailed to improve task response.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
appreciation
subtly
kindness
assisted
heartfelt
specific examples
sacrifices
safety
comfort
invitation
eager
personal connection
reflecting
impact
reinforcing
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