The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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In all the

age

categories, learning the local language, finding somewhere to live and making friends is challenging. The following paragraph will give you more information about the comparison between all

ages

to perform these challenges.

Comparitively

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Comparatively

, learning the local language is the most challenging for a person over the

age

of 55 years.

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person who's just over 18 but under 34

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25%

less

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harder

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to learn the local language. Finding somewhere to live is approximately the same for

ages

between 18-34 and 35-54 with a percentage difference of 1%. An average

indivisual

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individual

over the

age

of 55 will find it much easier to make new friends than a young adult from

ages

18-34.

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, most situations have

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average percentage of challenges for

ages

18-34 and 35-54.

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graph mainly highlights the major problems faced

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different

age

groups( mainly for younger and older

ages

) when moving to a new country or place.

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