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The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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In all the
age
 categories, learning the local language, finding somewhere to live and making friends is challenging. The following paragraph will give you more information about the comparison between all
ages
 to perform these challenges.
Comparitively
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Comparatively
, learning the local language is the most challenging for a person over the
age
 of 55 years.
However
,
a
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person who's just over 18 but under 34
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 25%
less
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harder
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 to learn the local language. Finding somewhere to live is approximately the same for
ages
 between 18-34 and 35-54 with a percentage difference of 1%. An average
indivisual
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individual
 over the
age
 of 55 will find it much easier to make new friends than a young adult from
ages
 18-34.
Overall
, most situations have
similar
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 average percentage of challenges for
ages
 18-34 and 35-54.
However
,
this
 graph mainly highlights the major problems faced
my
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 different
age
 groups( mainly for younger and older
ages
) when moving to a new country or place.
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