The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing
process
of noodles. From a comprehensive standpoint, it is evident that there are eight sequential steps in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
process
, commencing with the collection of Use synonyms
flour
outside the factory and culminating in the final Use synonyms
process
of packaging.
The initial step involves the storage of Use synonyms
flour
in a tank, typically facilitated by the transfer of Use synonyms
flour
from trucks to the storage facility. In the subsequent stage, the raw materials, comprising water, oil, and Use synonyms
flour
, are mechanically mixed. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, the roller machine shapes the mixture into dough sheets. Linking Words
Subsequently
, a strip is created along the dough machine, resulting in the formation of noodles in a disc-like structure. In the ensuing Linking Words
process
, the noodle disc is subjected to a frying Use synonyms
process
with oil until it attains a dry appearance.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the noodles are deposited into cups concurrently with the addition of vegetables and spices. Prior to distribution to customers, the final procedural step involves packaging, encompassing the application of labels and the sealing of noodle cups. Ultimately, the cups are prepared for distribution to customers.Linking Words
Submitted by muhammad.alwan on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, flour with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼