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The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the rate of
carbon
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dioxide
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production per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal which were produced over 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
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Overall
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, the average of
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dioxide
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in the United Kingdom and Sweden declined over the period given,
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in Italy and Portugal, it climbed. Over the given duration the United Kingdom had the highest emission of
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dioxide
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. On the one hand, the amount of
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dioxide
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emitted in the UK started at around 11
tonnes
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and it slightly decreased to about 9
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in the
last
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year.
Likewise
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, in Sweden, it began at approximately 9 metric
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and
then
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peaked at about over 10
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in 1977 before falling dramatically to almost 6 metric
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in the final year.
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, in Italy, the production of CO2 increased from just above 4 to just below 8 metric
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, in
Portugal
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it peaked at roughly 1 in 1967 and jumped to nearly 6 in 2007.
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