the graph gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 203 and 2040.
The line graph details the proportion of the number of people in four different cities in Asia between 1970 and 2020, with a predictable amount from 2030 to 2040.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the portion of the population in all the cities has an increased trend in the given period.
To begin
with, the Philippines and Malaysia started at the same point around 30% of the total population in 1970, then
the Philippines increased considerably at the end
of the period as well as
in predictable years. Whereas
Malaysia, after a little rise, approximately 50, in1990, fluctuated and finally
continued a steady growth trend until 2040.
As can be seen, Thailand and Indonesia had the numbers between around 12 to 18 in 1970, respectively. Indonesia had the same pattern as Malaysia. Additionally
, its trend was increasing at the end
of the period, at 65. Thailand after some fluctuations and across Indonesia in 2010, eventually increased to 50.Submitted by s_karimi2002 on
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