The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
The table provides information about the temperatures and
hours
of daylight in London
and Sydney
on the 28th, 29th, and 30th of December 2018. Overall
, the temperature in Sydney
is significantly higher than in London
. The weather in Sydney
is consistently getting warmer each day
. The hottest day
in Sydney
occurred on Sunday the 30th as it reached 31 degrees Celsius. On the other hand
, London
's weather fluctuates with no clear pattern. For example
, on Saturday the 29th, London
reached its highest temperature out of the three days observed at 13 degrees Celsius. However
, that same date is also
the day
when it reached its lowest temperature, at the level of 3 degrees Celsius.
The hours
of sunrise in London
were approximately 2 hours
and 15 minutes later than in Sydney
. On most days during December 2018, the sun rose in London
around 08.06 while
Sydney
residents experienced the sunrise much earlier at about 05.45. On the contrary
, the day
ended in London
nearly 4 hours
ahead of Sydney
; The sunset occurred at around 15.58 in London
while
the same happened in Sydney
at 20.07. As we can see based on the data, London
had relatively shorter days than Sydney
in December 2018 as a result
of London
's late sunrise and early sunset.Submitted by writingielts0 on
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