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The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.

The table give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in london and sydney during the same weekend in december 2018.
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The table provides information about the temperatures and
hours
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 of daylight in
London
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 and
Sydney
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 on the 28th, 29th, and 30th of December 2018.
Overall
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, the temperature in
Sydney
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 is significantly higher than in
London
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. The weather in
Sydney
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 is consistently getting warmer each
day
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. The hottest
day
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 in
Sydney
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 occurred on Sunday the 30th as it reached 31 degrees Celsius.
On the other hand
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,
London
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's weather fluctuates with no clear pattern.
For example
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, on Saturday the 29th,
London
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 reached its highest temperature out of the three days observed at 13 degrees Celsius.
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, that same date is
also
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 the
day
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 when it reached its lowest temperature, at the level of 3 degrees Celsius. The
hours
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 of sunrise in
London
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 were approximately 2
hours
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 and 15 minutes later than in
Sydney
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. On most days during December 2018, the sun rose in
London
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 around 08.06
while
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Sydney
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 residents experienced the sunrise much earlier at about 05.45.
On the contrary
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, the
day
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 ended in
London
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 nearly 4
hours
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 ahead of
Sydney
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; The sunset occurred at around 15.58 in
London
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while
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 the same happened in
Sydney
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 at 20.07. As we can see based on the data,
London
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 had relatively shorter days than
Sydney
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 in December 2018
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 of
London
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's late sunrise and early sunset.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, london, sydney, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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