The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.
The given bar
chart
illustrates the typical rainfall
during the last
year
per month and the line chart
provides information on a 40-year
trend
of the rainfall
in those months.
Looking at the overall
perspective, it is apparent that the rainfall
for the first month reached a peak and
in Aug and Sep dropped to a low. In terms of Correct word choice
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trend
, the rain volume decreased sharply from its peak in Jan to Apr and May and then
went down slightly to its low in Aug and Sep, before rising over last
three months of the Correct article usage
the last
year
.
According to
the bar chart
, Jan accounted for the highest amount of rainfall
at 70 mm
, followed by Feb and Mar at just below 60 mm
and 60 mm
respectively. Except for May when its rain volume (40 mm
) in
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last
year
outnumbered the general trend
valued at 30 mm
, and neither of the months from Apr to Oct experienced a value higher than 30 mm
. Also
, the figures indicate that the rainfall
went up sharply from 10 mm
in Sep to 60mm in the last
month.
In terms of compatibility of the bar chart
and line chart
, the general trend
can be seen in the last
year
except for Mar, May and June.Submitted by hamidreza.rezaei21 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, rainfall, year, trend, mm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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