The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

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The map shows a comparison between the present condition of the industrial area in Norbiton with the future situation after the development of the site.

According to

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the data, the changes that will be made after the redevelopment are extravagant in the three areas.

Firstly

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, on the east side, various factories will be revamped into houses, schools, medical centres, and playgrounds.

Secondly

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, on the west, the industrial site will be transformed into a housing field.

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, the centre of it will be turned into a boulevard that connects all areas within the site.

On the other hand

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, minimalistic changes will be made in two other areas. The north side of it will have a connected road on top of the river, easily connecting the people with farmland.

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, in the south, there will be no huge changes made, just the emergence of boulevards that

leads

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to big roads.

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, future modification is looking promising with the existence of various public facilities and greater access to basic necessities.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

In many countries, it is very easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, this causes some people to have problems with debts they cannot pay back. Do you think the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

2)The government should sometimes infringe on people’s freedom for the secutity of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement