The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of foreign tourists who visit three areas (the coast, mountains, and
lakes
) in the countries around Europe from 1987 to 2007. The data is presented in thousands. In general, the
number
of foreign
visitors
gradually increased from 1987 until 2007. The highest average
number
of
visitors
was the coasts, followed by the
lakes
, and the
last
was the mountains. The most significant peak of
visitors
happened between 1997 and 2002, with the destination being the
lakes
. At the beginning of 1987, the coast had the most visited by tourists with a total
number
of 40,000 people, followed by the mountains with a total
number
of 20,000 people. Meanwhile, the
lakes
became the
last
place to visit, with a total
number
of only 10,000 people. On the other side, the
lakes
showed a significant increase between 1997 and 2002, with the highest peak of around 75,000
visitors
, but
then
decreased between 2002 and 2007.
Conversely
, the coast had
slight
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a slight
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decrease between 1987 and 1992 of around 10,000
visitors
, but experienced a gradual increase between 1992 and 1997.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, lakes, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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