the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. summarize information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

summarize information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
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This
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line graph depicts the state of
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in a country over a period of seven years, where some of them were closed,
nevertheless
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, new ones were opened.
Overall
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, it can be seen that generally there was a significant variation in the count of closures and openings of
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over the given time .
According to
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what is shown, in 2011, numerous
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were opened, about 8500.
Then
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, a dramatic decline occurred by half in 2012, which was followed by a sharp rise over two years till it reached about 6100, in 2014. Before the process of opening stores remained constant, at 4000 from 2015 to 2016, it experienced a drop from 2014 to 2015. Regarding closures of
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, there was a slight decrease from around 6200, in 2011 to 6000, in 2012. After the count of closed
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reached its peak, at about 7100, in 2013, it declined dramatically to less than 1000, in 2015.
To sum up
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, we could say that, the count of stores which were closed, in 2018 was higher than the number of opened ones, which was the opposite from the beginning, in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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