The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting
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The box chart illustrates the
number
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of American
households
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by their yearly income in a 4-year interval between 2007 to 2015.
Overall
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, the
number
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of most
groups
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showed some degree of fluctuations throughout the years, with the notable exception of the middle and the second highest net worth
groups
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. In 2007, the
number
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of middle-income and middle-high-income
groups
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was around 20
million
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and 15
million
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, respectively. The
number
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remains relatively unchanged in the following year and the year after, particularly in the middle-income group.
However
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, the second-highest income
households
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showed a small increase to 15
million
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in 2015, with a slight dip in between.
On the contrary
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, a fluctuating trend was observed in the lowest, the low-middle and the high-income
households
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. There was a dip in the
number
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of high-income
households
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in 2011 before experiencing a resurgence to around 35
million
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in 2015.
However
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, the opposite occurred in the other two
groups
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, which experienced an increase in the
households
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instead
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, groups, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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