In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some predict that in the years to come, printed
media
, like books and newspapers, will no longer be purchased by the masses as accessing them via illegal pirate websites is becoming increasingly common. Use synonyms
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people
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media
these days is because of its overwhelmingly high prices. It is much more cost-efficient and easy to look up what they want to read and browse through several Use synonyms
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makes information much more accessible and can even cater to those less fortunate who do not have the funds to purchase educational school books, Linking Words
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is why I believe that in the future, Linking Words
people
will still buy printed books in order to support these artists.
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authors
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, I do believe that, to a certain extent, the sales of printed Linking Words
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