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The tables provide information about the public’s attitude to various local conditions and about issues that should be resolved by the government.

The tables provide information about the public’s attitude to various local conditions and about issues that should be resolved by the government.
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Both genders considered street lighting systems good (64 per
cent
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 for
men
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 and 63 per
cent
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 for women) with only 19 and 22 per
cent
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 respectively thinking it was poor.
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,
while
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 the same pattern is seen for crime levels, the proportion of both sexes thinking it was poor was much higher (32 per
cent
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 for
men
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 and 31 per
cent
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 for women); the latter
also
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 felt less satisfied when only 40 per
cent
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 of them were satisfied compared with
men
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 at 46 per
cent
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. There is a big difference between women’s satisfaction
about
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with
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 railway station safety compared to
men
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, 32 per
cent
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 compared to 48 per
cent
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 for
men
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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