The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.

The two maps illustrate the present form and the changes, which will be implemented in the future in Hunderstone town. Looking from an

overall

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perspective,

it is clear that

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in the future will be constructed new

road

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A4, meanwhile, some buildings will not experience any changes.

Firstly

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apply

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the proposed plan will be

new

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a new

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circular

road

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in the middle of

railway

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the railway

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Moreover

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airfield

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the airfield

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is going to be reconstructed

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into

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the

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industrial estate and will be connected to the railway.

However

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, the roundabout in the middle of

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the A2

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road

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will not witness any differences. Look at the maps for more detail,

it is clear that

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in future

will

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there will

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be established new

road

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A4, which will connect the A2

road

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, railway and town centre.

In addition

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, the gas station and town centre will be in the same place and will not see any changes.

Whereas

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, the build-up area ring

road

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will be reduced in size.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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153 words

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The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.

CEOs and executives should be paid the same salary as an average worker in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are more new towns nowadays, it is more important to include public parks and sports for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?