The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.
The two maps illustrate the present form and the changes, which will be implemented in the future in Hunderstone town.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is clear that
in the future will be constructed new road
A4, meanwhile, some buildings will not experience any changes.
Firstly
, in
the proposed plan will be Change preposition
apply
new
circular Correct article usage
a new
road
in the middle of railway
. Add an article
the railway
Moreover
, airfield
is going to be reconstructed Add an article
the airfield
to
Change preposition
into
the
industrial estate and will be connected to the railway. Correct article usage
an
However
, the roundabout in the middle of A2
Correct article usage
the A2
road
will not witness any differences.
Look at the maps for more detail, it is clear that
in future will
be established new Correct pronoun usage
there will
road
A4, which will connect the A2 road
, railway and town centre. In addition
, the gas station and town centre will be in the same place and will not see any changes. Whereas
, the build-up area ring road
will be reduced in size.Submitted by hebibli.eli on
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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