The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.

The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
The given three maps display the
amendmends
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amendments
that happened to a city named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that the landscape of the city became more urbanised, and some amenities like shops,
sports
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and sports
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field
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fields
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were added over the period. Looking more closely at the time frame between 1780 and 1860, the transportation infrastructure was developed, a bridge and a road were built.
In addition
, the
number
of homes doubled, and
also
the
number
of villages increased at that period.
However
, the prevalence of farms and wood decreased. Turning to the changes between 1860 and 2000, the
number
of villages and houses continued to rise,
in
particular
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the
number
of homes rose more than two times. Several shops were constructed
along
with
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the river,
moreover
a wetland was built at the south end of the river.
Finally
, sports fields and schools were placed, where the wood had stood before.
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