The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

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of demanding disparity textiles, including Polyester, Cotton, Cellulosic and Wool respectively between 1980 and 2015. The figures

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in million tons. In total, Polyester contained the most developed

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figures as the best, followed by Cotton as the second best.

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, Cellulosic and Wool stay almost the same in terms of value over

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of 35 years.

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, Polyester started at 5 in 1980

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increased significantly and reached a peak at almost 70 in 2015.

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, Cotton started slightly above 10 and rose moderately to around 30 from 1980 to 2015 respectively,

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these 2 textiles had a matched point at 20 in 1995.

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, Cellulosic was the third best in 1980, had decreased steadily and rebounded back over

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period.

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, Wool started

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nealy

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0 and rose to nearly 5 before 2000

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dropped back to almost the same figure.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Global demand
Textile industry
Natural fibers
Synthetic fibers
Manufacturing advancements
Fashion trends
Consumer preferences
Economic factors
Purchasing power
Eco-friendly materials
Market share
Production capacity
Polyester
Cotton
Wool
Nylon
Demand curve
Sustainability
Textile innovation
Fluctuations

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The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

In both education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder than others? Is working hard always a good thing?

In most countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more available. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get the news while others think that television is better for this purpose.

In the past people used to wear their traditional clothes depending on their culture. Nowadays the trend is changing and people wear different clothes. Is it a positive or negative development? How does it affect certain societies and people’s behaviour?